Ming Yuan: Mysteries (1)

[Xagonix]

Here's Ming Yuan's short memories.


"I'm sorry son, but I have to go." said Dad.
"I wanna come with Daddy! I got my whack stick and my pillow so I can come with!" Ming Yuan pleaded.
"I can't risk to lose you, I'm sorry. I'll be back once we send a message to the general."
"Daddy!"

................Hahaha!" said the bully.
"Don't make fun of my father!" Ming Yuan snapped.
"What are you going to do huh? Shoot magic at us? Hah! Don't make me laugh!"
"Grrr....."
All of a sudden, a bright light from Ming Yuan's staff shoots at the bully's shins.
"Ow! MOMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the bully cried.

"I'm sorry Ming Yuan, but after these decades, our searches for your father's ship has failed....." said the guard
"It's alright, I am aging, give up the search of my father, I shall do it alone..."
"Are you sure?"
"I am...."
Ming Yuan walks away from the guard station.

[tdm111]

((wow, nice work))

[Xagonix]

((thanks, i'm adding more right now))

[tdm111]

((the only thing i can think of to inprove it is to have Ming Yuan get into a fight, kind of like the one in memory 2, and then have that going through his head as he walks away. so it would work like a flashback instead of a random string of thoughts))

[Xagonix]

((Yes...well both of their memories were clouded because of an UNKNOWN INCIDENT.))

[tdm111]

((ok))

[Xagonix]

((Yeah, well since I can't put in TOO many memories, I'm keeping some so he can find out more during his life in MR))

((For those people who didn't know, MING YUAN is my chinese name))

[tdm111]

((cool, i actually just realized that my way adds in asomething after the "accident" so therefor wouldn't be affected. but w/e))

[Xagonix]

((yeah....))