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Post by Summer Lover on Jan 9, 2006 17:52:13 GMT -5
It was a hot, summer day. Vegetables were being chopped up for the cold stews served at Midsummer festivals. 6-year-old Adara, dressed in a limp,dirty, hand-me -down cotton dress was playing doll infirmary on the floor. Her corn cob doll had it's leg splinted and wrapped in a leaf with a dirt and water "herb poultice" to cleanse it. Annette, age nine, crept over and tapped Adara on the shoulder. Adara turned around and Annette stole her doll. "MAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!" Adara screamed," ANNETTE STOLE MY DOLLY. AND she's going to break it's leg AGAIN!!!!!!!!!" "Come get it you baby. Ada is a baby! Ada is a baby!" Annette taunted from the other side of the room." "MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Adara continued screaming. Their poor mother cut in, attempting to restore order(and her own sanity) "Annette, if you don't give Ada back her doll right now-" Annette screamed, "WHAT'D YA DO!!!!!!!!" And frantically ran around the room. Eyes wide, Adara looked at Annette's burning, thin cotton hem of her skirt,"I din't do nothin'," she whispered. Adara's poor mother grabbed a bucket of water and threw it on Annette. "WHAT HAPPENED?" she screamed at them. Annette, shaken but still an obnoxious older sister, pointed at Adara," She did it! I dunno how. Her hands glowed blue and then..." she faded off, geusturing at her skirt. Staring, wide-eyed at Adara, her mother said softly,"I think we have a mage in our family!"
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Post by Xagonix on Jan 9, 2006 17:56:43 GMT -5
Sweet!
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Post by <Insert creative name here> on Jan 9, 2006 21:12:06 GMT -5
((Aww... ^_^))
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Post by Summer Lover on Jan 9, 2006 21:29:51 GMT -5
((I am so proud that I actually wrote a story- even if it was just a way to procrastinate doing my science project....... and what part of the story is Aww?))
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Post by Xagonix on Jan 9, 2006 22:00:48 GMT -5
((probably the part where the parents go, "Our daughter is a mage! Hurray!" with big smiles on their faces))
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Post by knightET on Jan 10, 2006 17:53:46 GMT -5
(( it was sweet))
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Post by tdm111 on Jan 10, 2006 18:10:42 GMT -5
((FIRE!!!))
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Post by Xagonix on Jan 10, 2006 18:42:28 GMT -5
((is there going to be any more to the story?))
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Post by Summer Lover on Jan 10, 2006 19:14:06 GMT -5
((not currently, I am only able to write when the urge strikes, so probably not for a while congrats at using parantases(Spell?)))
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Post by The Taper Of The Ducts on Jan 10, 2006 19:22:09 GMT -5
((parentheses. ;D I wouldn't call it sweet, but it's pretty good))
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Post by Summer Lover on Jan 10, 2006 19:37:01 GMT -5
((Being my first willingly written story in about 4 years, I didn't expect "sweet" gracias though.))
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Post by tdm111 on Jan 10, 2006 21:01:38 GMT -5
((you would be surprised. puzzle in the cave i think was my first willingly written story, i just happen to know some good plotline techniques from video games))
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Post by Xagonix on Jan 10, 2006 21:55:45 GMT -5
((yeah you do! Yay video games!))
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Post by tdm111 on Jan 10, 2006 22:15:56 GMT -5
((will would know better than anybody because of my game in VE))
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Post by Xagonix on Jan 11, 2006 16:53:01 GMT -5
((Yeah lol....YAY FOR PARENTHESIS!))
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